Feedback

                                 

This is the feedback I got from Leanne for my blog. In this Leanne mentions that I need to go over my spellings and grammar. She also said that u need to work on my capital letters. I went over my spellings and make sure that they were correct. Leanne said that I had to make sure that I’m up to date with my work, which I’m going to make sure I am.

I’m also going to make sure that I keep a diary on what were doing and when were going to do it.

Fight Scene

For our homework we had to film a fight scene. For our fight me and Alfie played a couple that just broke up and we end up having a fight. We made it into a comedy fight scene as if is a really stupid fight were it looks like were playing around. We also had to add foley sound to the fight scene.