Feedback

                                 

This is the feedback I got from Leanne for my blog. In this Leanne mentions that I need to go over my spellings and grammar. She also said that u need to work on my capital letters. I went over my spellings and make sure that they were correct. Leanne said that I had to make sure that I’m up to date with my work, which I’m going to make sure I am.

I’m also going to make sure that I keep a diary on what were doing and when were going to do it.

Civildead feedback

These are the feedback we got from our presentation about our film from everyone in the class. From most of the feedback you could see that most of the class apart from one thought that our film had potential. One of the things that also need developing was the budget because it was to low.